Monday, 25 September 2017

My Inquiry

Powered by emazeFor Topic, We've been studying Children rights around the world and how we all don't have the same rights or even basic needs.  This is my DLO for Afghanistan.  Something that I enjoyed was creating this and something that I need to improve on is maybe putting more information in next time
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  1. Anonymous29 September 2017 at 12:27

    Hi Losalio.
    I like you did the layout of your inquiry, its really easy and clear to read. The images though are quite boring. I also didn't know that children that are fives years old are having being forced to work because its "unfair" for them, yet I also agree that its unhealthy for them and dangerous, including that they still have weak limbs, etc.

    Next time, could you make the images clearer and possibly fill up more space?

    What did you choose Afghanistan?

    Thanks!

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    1. Anonymous30 October 2017 at 14:26

      Hi Annabelle, Thank you so much for commenting I really do appreciate.

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  2. Anonymous29 September 2017 at 12:35

    Hi Losalio it Moni,
    I really like how you presented your presentation using emaze, It was creative. I like how you written that Kids have four or five hours at school then they,go home and do work instead of doing the homework. I did not know about that. Maybe next time you could make your front title more creative and put alot of effort on to making your front page better. But everything was perfect.
    Regards Moni

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  3. Anonymous29 September 2017 at 12:39

    Hi Losalio,
    Your inquiry was interesting. I agree that children that are five years old and who are working should not do work because of their health which is very important. Your information was very good and interesting but maybe next time you could add more information example what work they did.
    Overall well done!
    Eden

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