Tuesday, 14 February 2017

Planning for writing

This is my planning for my writing. It is for a video that we had to watch. My class has too make either a story or a report anything on this newspaper generator Next time I will put more idas in and maybe change some colour on it I hope you enjoy.
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  1. Anonymous7 March 2017 at 10:25

    Hi Losalio, I'm impressed with your planning. Your explanation about the short clip that you watch is very specific. I observed some of your spelling and when you typed 'My class has too make...' it's suppose to be just 'to' so the meaning can be right.

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  2. Anonymous7 March 2017 at 17:20

    Hello Losalio,
    i like the way you have made a mindmup for your planning. i also like how you put in some key words to explained your work. next time you could put in the title you did this on.
    Nicholas

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