Wednesday 18 October 2017

Chocolate Bar

This week we read a story about a goldfish recounting some of his life in a bowl. After we read the story we had to create our own story/recount about an object that we chose. I enjoyed doing this because I got to choose what I was writing as. Next time I will write more paragraphs.

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Chocolate Bar

 I am lonely, I´m stuck in this empty pantry. I wishing for friends. Everytime I think of me being lonely I think about the song Lonely. I´ve always wondered what it would be like if I had friends even best friends. In the morning some little creature/ human would come in the deserted pantry and grab a piece of me. At 12:00 I hear thousands/ four of creatures going past the empty pantry so swiftly. I feel my body dissolving. Suddenly at the right time I get moved into the fridge. Here we go again. I see so many weird shaped objects.

 As I am looking around I saw many more weird shaped objects. I start to get freaked out. After a few seconds I calm down. I heard a strange sound coming from far away, I get nervous. Out of nowhere the fridge door unlatched. I was unsure of what was happening. It had been one minute since the fridge door hasn't shut. However there was this huge sausage/hand coming directly at me. I overheard the the creature saying ¨cannot wait to eat dis¨. Finally the fridge door made it to its destination. 

 It was 9pm. I was feeling so friendless. There was no one to speak to no one.. Hold on a minute. I can talk to one of the weird shaped objects. I decide to call them their names. The green one was called cabbaccino, The purple one was called applant. The fridge got me to the point where I was hard as a brick. I decided to ask cabbaccino a question.

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